Update (B)log #2

After doing peer reviews this week, we really got to see how much we needed to alter our own paper. We had just done individual portions of  the white paper and had organized it into one document, but we were missing all the headers and some of our content was lengthy.

Yesterday I decided to fix up my portion of the white paper. I edited the executive summary so that is more concise and does not get into too much detail. In terms of my solution, I used a header and subheaders to make it more clear. Rather than it being the huge chunk of writing that it was before, it is now divided into sections that make sense complete with headers that really make it easier to understand (hopefully).

Also, I found two charts from the FBI's internet crime report to be potentially included in our white paper. We directly reference that report in our paper, and it would only make sense to provide the charts that support our claims.

I look forward to getting our peer review back so that we know what we must edit.