Outline

A: Opening Paragraph

      1. As a Child Development and Family Services student from Purdue University I would like you to consider me for the Assistant Director.

      2. As a recent graduate I learned of your position through CareerBuilder and looking at your direct sight. 

      3. I have always been interested in your company and I feel that it would be a great opportunity to be able to work and learn from such an established organization.  I believe my learned knowledge from college will enable me add to not only the company but children we are providing for. 

B: Middle Paragraph

      1. Over the years I have looked at your company through your webpage and always was very interested in working for you after graduation.   

      2. I find that your company is not only established, but well known to the public over all over the country.  This quality stands out to me and shares similar qualities of my own.

      3.    When I read your mission statement, "    " I felt you share similar values as my own.  I strive to work with children and to give them the ability to group at a young age.

      4. Skills

             a: working with individuals

             b: confident in my work

             c: encouraging

             d: multi-tasking

     5. Experience

            a: working with children in the Museum of Chicago

            b: working within multiple classrooms encouraging children to learn and explore their environments

                    -toddlers

                    -elem. schools

C: Closing

       1.  Thank you for your time and consideration

       2.  I look forward to hear from you

       3.  Please let me know if you have any question and will contact you a week from know to see if you have any questions for me.

       4. contact information

 

                  

 

This has great detail and

This has great detail and organization, and I like how much you talk about the company. Be careful to be realistic though; have you really been looking at the website for years?