Cover letter

I. Introduction

    A. Indication of the job I'm applying for.

        1. Business Anaylst

    B.  Where I found the job

         1. Uploading my resume on Careerbuilders.com

    C. Write about infromation that I found in the ad about the company.

        1. History

        2. Accomplishments

II. Body

     A.  Highlight credentials that I have for this position

          1. I have worked with different programming lanuages.

          2. Sql, PL/SQl, HTML, Oracle database

     B. Highlight my academic degree

         1. I have a bachelor dgree in Computer Infromational Systems Technology

         2. I have held many academic leadership positions during my schooling in my

             major.

         3. Obtaining my minor in Organizational, Leadership, and Supervison

     C.  Highlight my skills

          1. Great communication skills(give examples)

          2. I have skills using Microsoft office tools(list them)

          3.  Great leadership skills

      D. Highlight my work experience pertaining to his position

          1. Fisher and Sharprio Law Firm

          2. Village of Bellwood; Finance department

          3. Memorial Park District

III. Conclusion

      A.  Indicate my interest in being contacted for a future interview

      B.  Indicate my information on how they can contact me

          1. Phone number

          2. E-mail address

      C. indicate how enthused I am for the position.

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Good structure - this is the right idea!