Week 3: Music group -Individual Work

 I had done my part, history of problem and solution 3rd part. I had  a trouble with inappropriate solution but it solved with changing company which we were going to send.

 We have done our first draft of White Paper. I went to the Writing Lab and had counsel with Mr. John Hitz. I found some grammar errors and fixed it. The biggest problem was misunderstanding of executive summary. Not only executive summary, but also there are other problem, such as lack of source, wrong order of bibliography, parallelism and so on. I let my group know about those problems. My group gathered together and fixed every problem. I also make all paper contents with a same format.

 After I got peer review from other groups, I found that Sending Company was not appropriate according to our solutions. So we decided send this white paper to University. I am keep researching right now and Howard university seems need our solutions. I am researching more about college or university which concerns about illegal download music, but don't have solutions.

http://www.howard.edu/technology/info/web/policy/mp3policy.htm